🚫 Generic opener kills curiosity
"I hope this email finds you well" is the #1 phrase that makes people stop reading. It signals mass-send.
🚫 No personalization detected
Nothing in this email proves you researched this specific company. It reads like a template.
⚠ CTA is too strong for a cold email
Asking for a meeting or call too early creates friction. Try a curiosity question first.
⚠ Subject line is vague
"Quick question" is overused and doesn't hint at value. Try something more specific.
✓ Email length is appropriate
Short enough to read in under 30 seconds. Good.